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Hamkomtu bos kuus wöbusee,
muktare rranox tef'rece,
aa Iwa, Iwa iware.

Parom boo sa Nityr töshee,
sökomas öhaly solle,
aa Iwa, Iwa iware.

Caxaa ocaa bomeniite,
ros lektu bos rromarece
aa Iwa, Iwa iware.

Böjom' Netes dut tolsike,
iji vopesh Nityr arree,
aa Iwa, Iwa iware.


[demʊfu: iwaˑɹ

ham'kɔmtu bɔs ku:s wœˑbʊse:,
muk'taˑɹe raˑnɔks tefɹeskeˑ,
ɑ: i'wa:ʔ i:wa iˑwaɹɛ

paɹɔm 'bɔ: saˑ nɪˑtyɹ tœʃˑe:,
sœˑko'mas œˑhalˑy sɔl:eˑ,
ɑ: i'wa:ʔ i:wa iˑwaɹɛˑ

kxa'ksa: ɔska: bomeˑ'ni:te,
ɹɔs leˑktu bɔs rɔmɑˑ'ɹeske
ɑ: i'wa:ʔ i:wa iˑwaɹɛ

bœ'jɔmˑ netes dut‿'toˑlsikeˑ,
i'jiˑ vopeʃ nɪ'tyɹ:‿are:,
ɑ: i'wa:ʔ i:wa iˑwaɹɛ]


hymn-DEF light-GEN

raise-OPT-2SG.POL we-ACC FEM.DEF\PREP.place1-ABL abyss-PREP-DEF
heal-FUT.2SG.POL world.PL-ACC disease.ELI-GEN-ADJ-PL.ACC
EXCLAM light, light, light-GEN-ADJ

go.FUT-1PL we-NOM DIV\PREP.COM PN.2SG.POL war-DAT
NEG.V.OPT-FUT.3SG night-NOM come-INF
...

right-DEF only-DEF IPFV.be.2SG.POL
CNJ.CAUS rule-2SG.POL we-ACC all-GEN-ADJ-PL.ACC
...

listen-1PL.ELI PN.2SG.POL.ACC N\PREP.INS see-VN-PREP
shine.3SG word-PL PN.2SG.POL.GEN divine
...


Please, raise us from the abyss,
heal diseaseful world, (rranol is plurale tantum; ELI = elision from tefy)
oh Light, bright Light.

With You we will go to war, (DIV = divine)
may the night not come,
oh Light, bright Light.

You are being the only right,
for You rule us all,
oh Light, bright Light.

We listen to You with our sight, (böjomo)
Your more divine words shine,
oh Light, bright Light.
Short Hymn of Light translated into Aoma, one of my conlangs.

By the Lightlisteners of Eastern Sceptre in Grundet.

Same in native Jauhmö script: juhhmi.deviantart.com/art/Demu…
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UmberGrace Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013
Wow that's really some thing.
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juhhmi Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! :D
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UmberGrace Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013
your welcome
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IceboxYeti Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013  Student General Artist
Cool! I like the way you translated it. :)
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juhhmi Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! :D Inflections allowed nice e-endings though I couldn't entirely stick to VSO. Many words had to be invented, and I wanted to emphasize those in the new English translation.
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IceboxYeti Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Student General Artist
cool :)
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